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雅思小作文餅圖:內部比較與之間比較

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雅思小作文主要是圖表題,柱圖、線圖、餅圖等等,但是它有時候出現的不只是一個圖,還有多圖的形式,這次新航道成都學校要和大家帶來的就是多個餅圖寫作的分享,說一說它的內部比較與之間比較,一起來看看吧!

數據圖:【餅圖】

主要描述:【比較】。注意:比較關系存在于每個餅內部的板塊,也存在于餅之間。

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Introduction

Shown in the set of three pies are the average percentages of three substances consumed in Americans’ meals. in general, there are apparent similarities and notable differences.

開頭段落中的首句話的劃線部分是老章反復提及的倒裝現象。

開頭段落中的第二句話,既是對圖表的總述,也是套話,還有詞匯得分點(表示程度的形容詞)。

Body

老章強烈建議,在展開主體部分的寫作之前,對圖表中的信息進行分組:找到異同。一般說來,相同或相似在一組。然后,去對比于不同的一組。

First, the similarity between the intake of sodium and that of saturated fat is marked: in dinner, American people take in the largest portion (43% and 37% respectively) of a day’s whole amount of the two nutrients they consume. The second highest daily intake of sodium (29%) happens in lunch and is twice of the intake when Americans eat breakfast or snacks. Third, in terms of the consumption of saturated fat, there are no wide variations but a 5% difference between the meals except dinner.

The case with added sugar is vastly different. 42% – a predominating percentage – of added sugar is taken in during eating snacks, making a sharp contrast with the 16%-23% during the three regular meals.

Conclusion

Overall, since those substances may cause health problems if eaten in excessive amounts, Americans should be most careful when they eat dinner and snacks.

這個結尾段落的寫作內容有一些難度。難點在于超越了數字,去解讀數據暗示的信息(但是注意,這個解讀是安全的,是基于題目中的“all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much”而來的)。

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